Sunday, 1 November 2009

MY FAMILY by Kwok Ho Hin Ted, Class 4D

I am Kwok Ho Hin. You can call me Ted. I have a small family. There are four members in my family. My mother is a housewife. She works at home. My father is a teacher. He works at school. My sister is a security guard. My father is the strongest person in my family. My mother is the fattest. I am the youngest. I love my family!

5 comments:

Class 4D said...

I like it!

4d (26) said...

Write very good!!!

kwok ho hin said...

is good

anniechan24 said...

4D(26), here is your comment after editing:
THIS PIECE OF WRITING IS VERY GOOD!!!

anniechan24 said...

Kwok Ho Hin, here is your comment after editing:
IT IS GOOD!