Sunday, 1 November 2009

MY FAMILY by Wong Cho Yi Joey, Class 4D

I am Wong Cho Yi. You can call me Joey. I have a small family. There are three people in my family. My mother is a housewife. She works at home. And I have a sister. We go to the same school but she studies in primary 6. She is older and taller than me. This is my family.

3 comments:

wong cho yi said...

This is a good writhing,but it can be more good.
by Wong Cho Yi Joey

anniechan24 said...

Wong Cho Yi, this is your comment after editing:
THIS IS MY WRITING. IT IS GOOD BUT I CAN DO BETTER NEXT TIME.

Lau Wing Sze said...

I like