Bye bye, 6D
My best friends are in 6D.
Nice, generous and cheerful!
Friends, bye bye!
Bye bye, 6D
The best teachers are in 6D.
Patient, loving and caring!
Teachers, bye bye!
I will miss my school,
My class,
My friends,
My teachers!
All are kind and good.
I will miss all of you!
~ Andy Chan
Friday, 25 May 2007
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19 comments:
I think the best teacher is my Maths teacher .
Your poem is very well. But you can use more rhyme words.
Your poem is very well. But you can use more rhyme words.
The rhyme worde that in this poem are too less.
by Tao Chi Yin Karen
I think the rhyme words is too less.
by Yau Pok Man Frederick
I like this poem.
I like this poem.
By 6C Cheung Pui Yee Polly
i thank you can add more rhyming words.
i think use goodbye is better than use bye bye.
It is a great work!^^
You can use more rhyme words.
You can add more rhyming words.
Quite good!But you can use more rhyming words.
you don't have the rhyming words!!
I think the poem is too short.It can add some details ,for example,you can add why you miss your school and what things you are very like it with your classmates in your school .
It is good because it have a lot of adjective that describe people.
I like this poem.
I think there are very few pairs of rhyming words.
You can use more rhyme words,you use to less rhyme word.
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