I hope we are friends.
Our friendship will not end.
Later, we will leave this school.
I hope we will still be cool.
~ Lau Tsz Sum
Friday, 25 May 2007
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7 comments:
I think this poem is little but i can feel that the poem think.The words is very easy.
"friends" and "end",
"school" and "cool"
are rhyming words.
ABy 6C Cheung Pui Yee Polly
There hava some rhyme words!
They are "friends" and "end"
"school" and "cool"
"friends" and "end",
"school" and "cool"
are rhyming words.
The poem is quite good.But in the fourth line,'cool' is not suitable on this poem.
I think Wong Ching Man is right , the word "cool' is not suitable.
Well, "cool" here means "GOOD"! Smile!
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