Friday, 25 May 2007

MY FRIEND by Class 6D

My friend,
Remember the race we win?
Have you ever seen
The secondary school we will be in?
Don't throw our friendship in the rubbish bin.

~ Kate

12 comments:

calvin hon said...

i think this poem is telling me "i have a good friend is not easy", so i like this poem.

Jacky Lam Ho Ting said...

Can use 比喻法, good!

serina said...

UM...maybe she can write longer.

zoe choi said...

That's s great poem!
It can tell me that friendship is hard to get!

Yeung Yin Ting said...

That's s great poem!

Ma Yuk Yi said...

A good poem!I think your friends will not forget you.

Wong Yik Cheung said...

It is good but short = =

Wong Ching Man said...

I think this poem is quite good because the student's poem which have some ryhem words.
Well done!I like it!

Ng Ka Po said...

There are many pairs of rhymes

Cheng Wai yee said...

You use many rhyme word , and you have doen well!

Sita said...

It's really a great poem.I will not forget the friendship which is belongs to my good friend and I !!
^o^

Ip Tsz Ching Amy said...

Are your friend friendly?