i think this poem is telling me "i have a good friend is not easy", so i like this poem.
Can use 比喻法, good!
UM...maybe she can write longer.
That's s great poem!It can tell me that friendship is hard to get!
That's s great poem!
A good poem!I think your friends will not forget you.
It is good but short = =
I think this poem is quite good because the student's poem which have some ryhem words.Well done!I like it!
There are many pairs of rhymes
You use many rhyme word , and you have doen well!
It's really a great poem.I will not forget the friendship which is belongs to my good friend and I !!^o^
Are your friend friendly?
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i think this poem is telling me "i have a good friend is not easy", so i like this poem.
Can use 比喻法, good!
UM...maybe she can write longer.
That's s great poem!
It can tell me that friendship is hard to get!
That's s great poem!
A good poem!I think your friends will not forget you.
It is good but short = =
I think this poem is quite good because the student's poem which have some ryhem words.
Well done!I like it!
There are many pairs of rhymes
You use many rhyme word , and you have doen well!
It's really a great poem.I will not forget the friendship which is belongs to my good friend and I !!
^o^
Are your friend friendly?
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