Friday, 25 May 2007

HOPE by Class 6D

I hope when I go to my secondary school,
I will have teachers who…
Are kind and loving.
Just like you!
~ Jasmine Ho

6 comments:

Wong Ka Yiu said...

I think so .

Jacky Lam Ho Ting said...

... is no use.

Yeung Yin Ting said...

It is so short.

Wong Yik Cheung said...

Please add more!!It is too short!!

Wong Ching Man said...

I think it don't like a poem.It likes some sentenses in a paragraph.

Sita said...

I think this poem is quite short , maybe you can add more!!